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However, since you asked, I'll point out some that could be worked on.
1. The back is too straight. Usually, crawling people have their backs bent.
2. Her ass(or if you're squemish, buttocks/behind) are not round enough, not full enough. It needs to have a certaing curve as the pelvis is being put in a position to facilitate the leg being put like that.
3. Arms are too thin. It's like they are just skin and bones.
4. Left arm is not properly positioned, it's as if it was disjointed from her shoulderblades. Try imagining a skeletal structure or better still, actually sketch one.
5. She's gotta be an alien to bend her head at such an angle. Human-wise, the back has to bend upwards a bit to allow the head to be at this position.
I have little else to point. If I missed any, someone else would probably point it out anyway
I hope that helps. You could find anatomical tutorials online, somewhere, just look for them
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